Correct your Thesis Statement• Check for COHERENCE

• Caning should not be allowed in schools because it

- affects students’ physical- affects students’ emotional and mental well-

being- fails to curb indiscipline in schools

- Caning should not be allowed in schools because it affects students’ physical,

emotional and mental well-being and fails to curb indiscipline in schools

• Caning should not be allowed in schools because it …

• affects students’ physical• discipline problems still occur

• students’ mental and emotional well-being will deteriorate

*simple sentences combined = ??

FIRST DRAFT

• Thesis statement + body paragraphs

• Arial 11, spacing 1.5

• 2x ‘enter’ to begin new paragraph

• NO need cover page

• Mind your Grammar

• Deadline: NEXT WEEK, 2nd Lecture.

CAUSES?

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EFFECTS?

SOLUTIONS?

CAUSE – EFFECT ESSAY

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http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/10/18/Safe-place-for-unwanted-babies-Hatches-provide-lifeline-for-unwed-mothers.aspx

Surah 36. Ya Seen, Verse 62:

And he had already led astray from among you much of creation, so did you not use reason?

“Dan sesungguhnya Syaitan itu telah menyesatkan golongan yang ramai di antara kamu; (setelah

kamu mengetahui akibat mereka) maka tidakkah sepatutnya kamu berfikir dan insaf?

http://tafsirsunnah.wordpress.com/2012/01/09/tafsir-yasin-ayat-59-74/